Wednesday, August 1, 2007

Bubble Baths and Handguns

Kitty pulled the bubbles from the bathwater caressingly over her naked body. The hot water felt tantalizingly good on her aching frame, luring her body lower into the water. She closed her eyes, enjoying the slight tickle of the bubbles. The scars covering her body were not visible behind her closed lids but their presence could not be denied as her fingers traced each one blindly. As she lay her head back and let her body relax her hand instinctively went to the side of the tub where her Browning 9mm sat. Her hand slid over it, stroking the smooth expoxy finish. Her finger seemed to intimately invade the trigger, teasing it with her touch.

She places her foot against the wall of the shower and gently glides the the pistol across her thigh. It was a shame she hadn't just fired the weapon. This always felt a little naughtier when the barrel was still hot. Images of of her targets passed through her mind. Always pleading for their lives, repenting whatever sin had brought her to their doorstep. But in the end they all met the same fate. Their was no deliverance from what they were to face. At times it was quick, a bullet to the back of the head and other times she drew it out, shooting off one finger or toe at a time. The severity of their sin determined the severity of their punishment and no amount of begging could change what they had done.

11 comments:

William said...

Go on.. this is interesting to say the least...

Unknown said...

Very good start Darlin! Don't think that 'seductively good' sounds right though. Seems it should be worded differently. Can't wait for the rest!

~you asked~

Unknown said...

I love the addition, "luring her body lower into the water."

BUT..you still say, "seductively good"...Just doesn't sound right together..

What about, 'seductively titillating' OR 'seductively tantalizing?'

William said...

I have to agree with ambre on that one.. it's still very good, but perhaps changing that one word would help

Head Cookie said...

Hey there I got here finally Phew. Nice start when will there be more?

Head Cookie said...

ummm hello you are forgetting the link to me www.jadey73.blogspot.com

Just a subtle hint lol.

Darlin_Jo said...

Ok guys I changed it...I agree it does flow a little better.

Jadey I am workin on the second part as we speak...or type..

~Darlin~

Unknown said...

PERFECTO!! Now it reads smoooooth!!

~did I say that out loud?~

Head Cookie said...

yes it does flow better and thanks for putting my link there :)

Reverend Michael Kilgore said...

There are not many bubble baths that I don't want to join, ut this may be one! As always, vivid imagery....

Unknown said...

walks around whistling...